Ramzan in Atlanta
Jab koi dhaan paan si
Sanvli si dikhne wali ladki
Wazu kiye
Safed dupatta odhe
Mere khayal -e- masjid ki
Seedhiyon pe aa khadi hoti hai
Aankhon main bas ek lafz liye
"Chalen!"
Main ye samajh jata hoon
ke Ramzan aa chuka hoga!!
Labels: GA, Gwinnett County, Post Court - Duluth
posted by Ye manzilen !! at 10:37 AM
10 Comments:
Its lovely!!
Ramdhan Mubarak !
Subhan' Allah...lutf aa gaya
Shayri ke teenoN wasf jo muqtadar asaatiza ne aala shaayri ke liye waza'a kiye hain: parvaz-e-takhayyul, maani-afreeni aur nazuk-khayaali is nazm meN yakja ho gayee hain.....
Kaash urdu script mein bhi post karte....[please see typos: saloni, khadi.
Waise is nazm par kaafi tafsili guftgu ho sakti hai...
@Esha: Thanks buddy
@Deepak: Thank you so much yara!
@Indscribe: Yaar, sach bataoon. Beemar tha....18 ghnate contious soya.
Tanhai. Beemari.....aur phir chaand raat...sach mano main ye first draft hi hai. Never went back to correct it. Thanks for the corrections. Kartaa hoon..
"Zindagi usi ke tassavour main kati"
"Door reh ke bhi wohi kaam aaya!"
@ Indscribe: Yaara, Milenge to IA kafi aur bhi topics honge.....is se acche!! lol
beautiful :)
aaj kal ki rasm (jo mujhe kuchh nai lagti hai) ke mutaabiq ... ramzaan mubaarak janaab!
abhi tk ladkee khyalon mey aati hai aur kambakht ramadhan mey bhi satatee hai....lol!!
ooopps forgot to mention that credit should go to one of my friend Ghazala Lari :)
@ani: Thanks buddy....whats the news?
@Urdudaan: Yaara, been so busy and never got a chance to visit my blog. Hence no response. Thanks for the wishes.
@Shiraz: Thanks for stopping by....
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